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That was great! I loved how harry umm....what should I say..... ended up wanting Hermione?! It made me laugh...... a lot! great job, once again.

Because your brain dislikes the computer. Why are there words?

I think that this was actualy quite good. I don't care what everyone else says, i think this will make an excellent story. keep it up and keep ME posted!

For your first poem, excellent. I like the way you talk about the girl coming back from weed and drugs and becoming into a better person because of love. The ...

Very good story line. I think it was as excellent as the other ones that you have posted. This was a great chapter!

I liked how you gave the reader different choices. Very unique. The imaginary was good, and best of all, you fit the rhyming in perfectly. All in all, lovely, funny, ...

She was a great beauty, she was alive. She was human, she laughed and she cried. Then came he. She never wore make-up before, she never looked like a whore. ...

Thanks. I kind of changed it a bit, so thanks for your advice.

I love it. Nice character desriptions!!

I like the emotion. It was rather gollmy, but who am I to say that it can't be gloomy. You should just write whatever is in your heart. Sad, mad, ...

I can't stop laughin'. Godd job....gangsta'

I really liked the story, but could you space out some of it? I don't have time to nit-pic right now, so I'll be back! Great story though.

Whoo! Continue! Love the story. More chapters please!

Whewhh, this is a really good story amber. I loved every bit of it!

wow. The feeling here was powerful. I love it. Here come the butterflies! I, alond with a lot of people can relate to it. Excellent flow.